I can't shake the feeling that, in drafting a document far longer than the last version, there's more opportunity for exclusion, division, misunderstanding and mis-proclamation. Long passages suggest we don't know ourselves -- or perhaps trust ourselves -- well enough to speak plainly and briefly.
I went back and looked to the Object of the General Assembly of Unitarian and Free Christian Churches (UK). They come from a different historical place than we do and the document has an inelegant legal tone, so I don't expect us to emulate them, except to the degree that it doesn't say more than it needs to.
Eliza, scolding Freddy, was right.